Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that whether sharing the

information

from scientific research, business and the academic

world

were a proper way or hiding

those precious knowledge

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confidentially were be much

more safe

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. In

this

essay, I will discuss both

of

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views and give my own perspective.

First

and foremost, owing to the contribution of ancestors, our lives are getting better and

bether

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better

. All of the

advancement

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advancements

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are from the

heritagous

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heritage

knowledge and experiences

came

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that came

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from the past.

Advent

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The advent

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of

information

from science and business made a big step for the

world

. Without sharing

of

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the

explosures

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exposures

exposure

,

human

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a human

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being

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beings

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couldn't make the

world

turn. To take the discovery of

the

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gravity as an example, if there were no instructor generously sharing the insight of the discovery and were no later feedbacks and reflections showed by the others , there probably were no integrating knowledge that people can be educated nowadays.

On the other hand

, there are some exceptions. Some

information

involved

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political

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in political

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issues and

domestical

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domestic

safety aren't suitable to share.

For instance

,

the

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north

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Korea

are

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devoloping

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developing

the nuclear bomb, they might not be able to reveal the progress and procedure they are going through because they might not want other countries

get

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the research they get.

Furthermore

, people might not want to share the discovery of the diamond halls from Africa, because it might cause some

unevitable

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inevitable

invasion. In conclusion, in my point of view,

although

it is positive to share valuable

information

for progress to the

world

, there are still some sensitive

information

should

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be

hiden

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hidden

to remain a peaceful society.