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Even though globalisation effects the world's economy in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. discuss both views

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Considering the fact that in the status quo statistics related to the number of factories and companies are increasing more and more in comparison to past.
Although
 it can be fruitful in terms of the
economy
 for our world, a majority of individuals strongly believe that its
drawbacks
 should not be underestimated. The fundamental
drawbacks
 and benefits as well as both points of view are elaborated hereunder. To commence with, one justification frequently given for
drawbacks
 of globalisation is that people asset it may decrease the payments they received. It goes without saying that when
numbers
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 of corporations increase joblessness will be eradicated.
Nevertheless
, more
employee
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employees
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 and
worker
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workers
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 are available. The more workers are available they can be hired with
lower
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a lower
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payment
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.
One
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 the contrary, globalization can broaden access to goods and services which can lead to making
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the economy
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economy
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 situation better. It has often been alleged that globalisation makes more goods and services available to more people. If you had disposable income and you are buying a product
which
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 comes from abroad you are benefiting from globalisation to some extent which may tend to boost
world's
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the world's
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economy
.
Furthermore
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 it is worth mentioning that business owners
also
 benefit by having access to
a higher markets
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higher markets
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 for offering better products and stuff. Taking everything into consideration, for manifold reasons, the advantages of expanding companies and factories more and more by far surpass its
drawbacks
 as it can make
world's
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the world's
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economy
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economic
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 state of
affair
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affairs
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 better.
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