It is as important to teach children to protect the environment as it is to teach them to read and write. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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there is no doubt that it is essential to teach children how to save the environment, I think it does not have the same importance

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teaching them how to read and write.

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is because reading and writing skills are vital for their brain development and at

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young age, they can not be responsible for environmental protection. in

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essay, I

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support my opinion with examples.

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, Langauge skills are the basic knowledge that the

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should be taught especially at

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early stage of their life. As those skills help them to learn about everything else

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as Science,

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, Geography and other topics.

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, If the child learns reading and writing, he can not just only easily communicate with others but

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express himself in a better way as he will be well-educated.

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, recent research shows that the

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brain has a wider capacity to learn new things than adults.

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, I suppose that teaching the children to protect the environment is

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because they can not

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for

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, If

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acquire those essential language techniques, they would be able to read articles about keeping the

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areas clean.

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, being capable to read and write not only benefits the

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has an insurmountable effect on society. To conclude, I completely disagree that learning about saving the surroundings is not as necessary as knowing about reading and writing at the

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of the child's education stage.

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is because it is too early and language lessons are way important, So these children will be highly educated when they grown-up.