Government should invest more on science education rather than other subjects to develop the country . To what extent do you agree or disagree for this statement

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should give preference to

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-based subjects over others, in an attempt to help boost a

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future development and progress.To some extent, I agree that

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is desirable but I

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feel that non-scientific disciplines must be included.I

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assertion

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higher extent and the pertinent notions will be explicated

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The primary reason for investing

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in

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is that the advent of modern

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has brought

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numerous improvements to the way that countries and societies function. Increased electrical and

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technologies have improved to much more work on efficient workplaces.

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, sources of renewable energy,

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as solar and

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power, are beginning to help ease the planet’s reliance on fossil fuels. In

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people can understand the predictions of

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weather forecasting

and our universal system with the help of scientific tools.

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,

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education

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is required for a variety of occupations, including physicist, medical scientist, and others. People cannot acquire these kinds of positions without a

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-based understanding, which helps produce greater economic value Non-scientific topics,

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argument is that topics like arts and history are critical in assisting pupils in gaining a broad understanding of the world and developing into

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individuals.

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, arts encourage students to be more creative and confident in their expression, which cannot be achieved just via math and

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to the reasons stated above, I feel that ignoring these issues may result in an imbalance in the distribution of the nation's labour. A country cannot progress only on the basis of

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while the other aspects are neglected. To summarise, while the government must financially support

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education

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, I do not believe that a nation's economy can be improved if the other components are ignored. It is necessary for equitable growth, that the government looks into all the aspects for the nation to prosper.