Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

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are increasing and the majority of people think that it can create serious social problems. In

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the effect of these problems and some solutions to solve them.

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scenes

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films

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can lead to detrimental impacts on the public.

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people are copying the way to fight in the

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and they realize that they can

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reality. In fact, the

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and

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are all scripted and

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has no script.

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, teenagers and adolescents can influence the

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they see on the screen because at

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age, they are examined everything and they do not know what is right and what is wrong.

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, if the movie showed the characters

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the

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they did not get in trouble,

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, they think the same way as after they

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the

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, they could not go into

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jail.

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,

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would lead to

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delinquency among the youth.

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, there are several solutions to tackle these problems. Government should take

actions

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for those kinds of

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the

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parts.

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, film industries should be focused

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attention on the younger age group which will have more informative and educational. Children’s programs should be strictly controlled.

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, parents should choose carefully what their children watch and they have to spend more time with their children. In conclusion,

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films

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can cause people to commit

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a crime

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crime

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.

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, the best way to solve

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problem is that government, media and

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should take responsibility

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reducing the influence of

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movies

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. It is not only reducing the

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rate but

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protect

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society as a whole.