Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

Nowadays, the rates of
violence
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movies
and
films
are increasing and the majority of people think that it can create serious social problems. In
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the effect of these problems and some solutions to solve them.
To begin
with, the
violence
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scenes
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films
can lead to detrimental impacts on the public.
Firstly
, most
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people are copying the way to fight in the
movies
and they realize that they can
also
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reality. In fact, the
movies
and
films
are all scripted and
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has no script.
Secondly
, teenagers and adolescents can influence the
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they see on the screen because at
this
age, they are examined everything and they do not know what is right and what is wrong.
For instance
, if the movie showed the characters
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the
crime
and
then
they did not get in trouble,
therefore
, they think the same way as after they
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the
crime
, they could not go into
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jail.
Consequently
,
this
would lead to
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delinquency among the youth.
However
, there are several solutions to tackle these problems. Government should take
actions
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for those kinds of
movies
such
as
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or
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the
violence
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parts.
Moreover
, film industries should be focused
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attention on the younger age group which will have more informative and educational. Children’s programs should be strictly controlled.
In addition
, parents should choose carefully what their children watch and they have to spend more time with their children. In conclusion,
violence
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films
can cause people to commit
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a crime
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crime
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.
Therefore
, the best way to solve
this
problem is that government, media and
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individuals
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should take responsibility
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reducing the influence of
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movies
. It is not only reducing the
crime
rate but
also
protect
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society as a whole.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitization
  • empathy
  • aggressive behaviors
  • imitation
  • antisocial behavior
  • normalization
  • climate of fear
  • perceptions
  • mental health
  • aggression
  • emotional regulation
  • trauma-related symptoms
  • age ratings
  • critical viewing skills
  • nonviolent entertainment
  • film industry
  • regulate
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