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It is as important to teach children to protect the environment as it is to teach them to read and write. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is argued that children should be taught the
importance
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 how to
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environment
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 as equal as to read and write. I strongly agree with the aforementioned statement and with
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 I will explain my standpoint. Protection of the surroundings is one of the prime priorities to make the youngsters widen their knowledge because they need to know about the healthy ecosystem and the
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environment
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. In the world we live in today,
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ecosytem
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ecosystem
 is essential to attain a proper circle of life and attainment of it can be provided by starting with the youngster. Several people believe that it is essential to start giving them knowledge while they are still young because their mind is still fresh.
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, enhancing their learning the
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 of living things in which they generate in life and their
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 on planet earth give
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 them.
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, during my pre-school days, they taught us how to plant small vegetables, since I started at
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 age until now I can say that I
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 even the minimal thing on earth.
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, awareness
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 a clean community can
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 to the young people and the future of them can benefit the same as on the way they
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communicate
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 as simple writing and reading them stories about the
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environment
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. It may
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impact
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 generation, the prime example is the recent pandemic Covid-19. In research, it started in the dirty
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 of the Wuhan market, if only they knew the
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 of cleanliness, maybe the pandemic might not happen. In conclusion, young people should be given the same amount of knowledge in the
environment
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 as to read and write because to know the
value
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 of ecosystem early and to make an
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 on clean surroundings.

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