Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are equally responsible for solving this problem To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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a healthy life habits

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have

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vital importance for all humans

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for

kids

. To some people,

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of

kids

are suffering from a bad lifestyle that impacts their physical health, and, schools and

parents

have the same duty to dissolve

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issue. In

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essay, I will completely agree with

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argument regarding educational places as a precious place for

kids

and

therefore

should have the same mission with

parents

in order to help

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children

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to have a physically active and healthier lifestyle. There are a bunch of strong assertions in order to emphasize the value of schools on pupils well being.

First

of all, educational entities are places where

kids

supposed

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to learn not only academical

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but

also

health related

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knowledge. To explain, teachers should give lectures about staying healthy and building healthier dietary and physical habits.

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students

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curriculum to let them stay active with sports.

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lunch time

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, each educational

facilities

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should serve nice foods with a combination of

adaquate

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adequate

amount of

carbonhydrate

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carbohydrate

carbohydrates

, fat and protein that are appropriate for children's age. Undoubtedly, there sure are some obvious claims exist in standing for

parents

also

have a significant role on producing a nonsedenter, healthy kid.

To begin

with, mothers and fathers are obviously the primary role model of a child.

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, if a parent wants a healthier child, the change should

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within that parent. Another key mission of a parent is to entice the kid to perform a variety of

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.

For example

, a father can push his child to sign up for basketball class per se or any other activity that would have

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impact

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kid's

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well being. In conclusion, it is undeniable that nowadays,

kids

are not healthy and

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recipe for

this

issue is letting schools and

parents

be co-responsible and take action.