The continued rise of world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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increased population of the world is a vital issue we are facing. I agree with the statement mentioned because it can cause the demand in

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rise and able to provide an unbalanced ecosystem. A large

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population may

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not a bad habit,

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the nations stress

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to survive. There can be the pros in

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census but the cons are much higher; a huge natural resources demands in a huge number in

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in nations profit.

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are the prime suspect for

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have a massive demand

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profit-making and the government cannot deliver properly because of overpopulation.

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community population can attain

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negative effect on

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responsibility

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in the cycle of life,

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in number can have

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adverse ramification on

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environmental safety may result

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negative effect,

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that happened

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in the field and

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number of rats makes our rice

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. In conclusion, I strongly agree that overpopulation causes

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because of the economical surge and negative

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on

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