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Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific arguments presented in the reading passage.

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both listening and the reading are discussing
dinosaurs
. The former is of the opinion that the
dinosaurs
 are not
endotherms
. While the latter provides three points to support her belief about
dinosaurs
 are
endotherms
. highlights
To begin
 with, the
first
 issue we encounter is associated with the polar region. The speaker that
this
 theory is not convincing due to the fact that the fossils have been discovered in a warmer area.
Moreover
, she demonstrates her point by saying that the region is warmer than today.
Furthermore
, she says that during polar regions cold, the
dinosaurs
 to a warmer area or hibernate like other animals.
On the other hand
, the text posits that only animals that are able to manage a temperature in the environment could be active in
such
 cold climates.
Moreover
, another topic of the debate revolves around the position and movement of legs. Once again, the professor points out that legs under the body are body structures to support more weight.
Besides
, she illustrates
this
 point by mentioning that the
dinosaurs
 are being large in size are the advantages.
However
, the article confirms that the physiology of endotherm allows sustained physical activity like running in order to be efficient only if an animal's legs are positioned underneath its body. To wrap things up, the final point in the discussion is connected to bone structure and endothermy. The instructor suggests that the bones of
endotherms
 include structures called Haversian canals. What's more, she explains that these canals are thickening and indicate time.
Additionally
, she provides that it will stop growing in a cooler period and if it grows normal, slow and rapid, it is not
endotherms
 because
endotherms
 grow rapidly even environment become cooler.
Nevertheless
, the passage states that the fossilized bones of
dinosaurs
 are dense with Haversian canals
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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