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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people have? Has this been a positive or negative development?

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The given pie chart represents the cuisines preferred by the people of Canada for takeaway, while the bar graph shows the number of
Indian
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restuarants
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restaurants
 established in Canada between 1960 to 2015. From the data provided in the pie chart, it is observed that Chinese is the
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favorite
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 cuisine followed by
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. Whereas, the least
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cusine
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 are Mexican, Japanese, and Greek. In the bar
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 we see that the number of
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restuarants
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 increased considerably from 1960 to 2015.
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 food accounts for over half of the takeaways in Canada. The figures stood at 34% for the former and 26% for the latter respectively. The preference for Italian and Persian food for ordering is almost the same at 10% and 9% respectively. Thai and
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 for 3% and 4%, while 11% of a certain type of cooking style is never ordered. Mexican, Japanese, and Greek have a minor proportion for takeaways at 1%.
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, the number of
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 in 1960 was negligible, which increased significantly to
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80000 in 2000, from here on it kept increasing till 2009 to above 8000.
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, in 2011 it showed a slight decline in comparison to 2009, though still registering over 8000
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, which continued till 2015
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interact
  • Social media platforms
  • Networking
  • Instant messaging
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Misunderstandings
  • Emotional context
  • Superficial connections
  • Deceptive identities
  • Privacy concerns
  • Social skills
  • Video calls
  • Online presence
  • Digital communication
  • Cyber relationships
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