You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Fred I am
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sorry
to hear that you are struggling to fit in your new school.Speaking from my experience ,I fully understand what you are going through right now. Remember my
first
days of moving to the UK ? It was not easy at all. You are the only person who made me feel welcome,Joining the chess club made it easier for me to get to connect to most
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classmates ,even though it was not easy to understand each other due to my rusty
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.I would suggest that you join the Art club since you are a big fan of art,
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will give you an opportunity to meet other students who
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the same interest as you,being with
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people
around you will give you some confidence. If you
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don't
mind ,I can connect you to my cousin "Rowan",He is currently doing a diploma in Education at your college,Maybe he can assist you with settling in,you can be able to hang out after school for a coffee .He is actually a friendly person,You will love her! I hope you will find
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information useful to you. Good luck
Easther
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Esther
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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