Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say that they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The desire to achieve wealth and be free from all the laws is developing more and more these days in
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, especially in youth, because of violent movies and
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coming into the market. Pleasure items showing a high amount of aggression, do affect an individual's nature if watched regularly.
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opinion and gives an insight into
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. On one hand, Violent films and
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are gaining a hike in the industry these days. What makes the crowd like about these films?
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of luxurious things shown in these is the main attraction for the masses. Heavy guns, Handsome cars, Beautiful bungalows and the
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of clothes they wear to show off. Even most of the song albums area
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launched keeping
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in the mind, which attracts most of the
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. Influenced by
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of entertainment most of the youth tries to flaunt expensive cars, and guns in their hands, in
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most of the young generation buys those weird clothes.
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has a negative effect on their parent's pockets and on themselves too in terms of showing off.
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,
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like pubg had a bad effect on children as they became aggressive in nature and most of the parents were complaining about it. Even one child took his life because he had spent a lot of money on one game and was ashamed to tell his guardians.
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, many have control over them and just watch films and play
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for relaxing only.
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, the frustration of work-related issues can be calmed by watching action movies,
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some
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like to play violent
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while returning home from the office in order to not puke their anger on children or spouses. To conclude, many
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like to see action movies and play
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but it should be done in a controlled manner as it can affect their nature and they can become aggressive. Banning
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of entertainment will not help society.
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