environmental problems such as pollution and climate variation are increasing nowadays. the government have take some measures at a global level. but they only get a few solution .why it is so? how can this problem be solved ?

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Asides from their well-established careers, all four of the speakers amazed me with their manner of professionalism, glowing charisma and confidence. Even though each of the four guest speakers has something unique to offer as they are all successful people in their fields, I find myself connected the most with
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Dam Huy Phat - a simultaneous interpreter for over 9 years. Before his speech, I would never have imagined myself in a role of a professional interpreter. Since the very
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Phat and his lively stories about interpreting drew me
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an extent that sparked my aspiration of working in the field. Throughout his speech, I understand that though flashy as it may look, interpretation is indeed a demanding job, both physical and mental. That explains why in a cabin there must always be two people switching roles sequentially after 30 minutes of simultaneous interpreting to prevent fatigue.
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Phat’s sharing, I was introduced to the art of presenting my CV as well as highlighting my strengths and weaknesses in the interview round in the
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Phuong Vi. Thanks to her, I have recognized the importance of self-branding in the age of digitalization like today.
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Vi said, which gave me reassurance and faith in a brighter future, “If you have confidence, you can do anything in life.” In retrospect, the webinars give me a chance to reflect on myself, listing out what I have and have yet to achieve over the past three years at the English Faculty. The most critical notion I have acknowledged from the webinars is no matter what career path
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must have both specialized knowledge and soft skills. Since I was a freshman, I have been participating in many club and volunteering activities, I am certain about my interpersonal skills, particularly in communication, teamwork and negotiation. Currently, I am aiming for larger organizations like NGOs/NPOs, not only to enlarge my network and sharpen those skills but
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Degree in Linguistics. I am a firm believer that education is the root of everything; so as to become a competent worker either as a teacher or an interpreter, I must educate myself to perfection. The biggest drawback of me would be the fact I am too ambitious and quite an idealist; I set high standards for everything I do in life
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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