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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Certain companies find that recent recruits in a
company
 lack collaboration
skills
 among their peers. There are various reasons why newly hired employees often have fewer interactions with their colleagues. In
this
 essay, I will illustrate the reasons why certain newcomers in a
company
 exhibit a lack of collaboration
skills
 that are necessary for them to
work
 in an efficient
environment
. Among the solutions to improve social awareness, cooperation and communication
skills
.
Firstly
, the behaviour that most new recruits exhibit is nervousness. It could be reasons
such
 as, they are not used to the
environment
 and they are still familiarizing themselves with the
company
 and the culture before doing any sort of engagements.
Additionally
, they might be used to an
environment
 where collaboration
skills
 were not required from their past job experiences.
Therefore
, the traits that they have adopted have been carried over into their following jobs.
Secondly
, they prefer to
work
 alone, simply to avoid any conflicts that may delay their momentum at
work
.
This
 is mostly true for developers working in the field of technology. Were tight deadlines , long hours, and a careful amount of detail must be maintained.
Hence
, the lack of communication
skills
 results in poor overall
company
 decision making and dynamics. In conclusion, companies have the responsibility to ensure that trust, teamwork and solidarity are embedded into the
company
's core values. Some solutions can be team-building exercises to promote group activities within the team.
This
 is to ensure newcomers are able to
work
, communicate and collaborate in a comfortable
environment
.
In addition
,
this
 reduces feelings of contempt and isolation among the employees.
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