"Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Pregnancy is a remarkable part of females' lives which has huge effects not only on their bodies but

also

on their lives.

Therefore

, it is said that the decision of having a child should be made by mothers.

However

,

this

idea has resulted in a belief that has put the

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greater

responsibility on mothers in nurturing offspring rather than fathers. I am

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completely

in disagreement with the above-said belief and believe that both

parents

are responsible the same. The following essay will overlook two rationales that support my idea.

Firstly

, each gender has

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qualifications that are needed for a child to become an

usefull

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useful

society member.

For instance

, healthy humans should be able to deal with a vast range of emotions in their day-to-day lives from expressing their interest to controlling their anger. The former ability is usually learned by observing maternal

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while the latter one is usually more earned with paternal

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,

although

there are always some exceptions.

Thus

, spending a

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time with both

parents

is essential to be well-trained before entering

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society.

Moreover

, fostering

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offspring needs time and effort.

Hence

the twentieth-century's inflation forced all family members to work, taking care of children has to be shared between both

parents

.

For example

,

parents

have to work

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different shift hours to make sure their children will not be remained unsupervised and

also

be able to afford their expenses.

In addition

, a great number of women have been working for years to

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achieve

their accomplishments, so it is not acceptable to expect them to choose between their jobs and their offspring. To sum up, the

privilage

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privilege

of deciding to get pregnant does not justify putting the great responsibility of taking care of babies on mothers' shoulders. I believe that fathers should play their roles in

this

matter because they

also

have specific qualifications that are needed for a baby to grow up and

also

the time

that is

required for a child is not provided unless by the division of responsibilities.