Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. 250 Words Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

Many People claims that high remuneration is more advantageous in comparison to

appropriate

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an appropriate

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working environment despite lack of

satisfaction

with their

job

I firmly disagree with that statement of

essay

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the essay

an essay

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. I strongly believe that

working

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the working

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atmosphere and

job

routine should be relaxed and not hectic

also

align with the

person

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person's

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ability

instead

of pay that may lead some mental illness to a

person

.

First

of

all

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it is worth considering high pay

although

its

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it

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bring bread and butter for living

however

job

satisfaction

should be on top of priority that a

person

carrying a

job

should be overjoy with their work and do not compromise their comfort zone and

also

spend quality times with their family and kids. Many

researcher

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researchers

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claims that

job

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a job

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carrier should be parallel to a

person

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person's

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capacity that enables a

person

to carry

job

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a job

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in

longer

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a longer

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perspective

that is

not beneficial only for a

person

also

for the company.

Secondly

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,Secondly

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there is a correlation

with

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job

satisfaction

and productivity of work. It

is motivate

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motivates

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you and

also

provide

a

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apply

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carrier growth. A

person

who loves their

job

can easily excel in their fields of work and achieve better results as compared to those whose

first

priority is high wage.

For

Instance

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Sir Amjad was working for a company with a high salary package but he had to compromise

a

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apply

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plenty of things to

carrying

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carry

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their

job

he decided to leave it and later on he became

successful

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a successful

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entrepreneur and run their own business progressively. To sum

up

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,up

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high salary package might bring sudden happiness

although

prosperous thing should be

job

satisfaction

that is

over and above than high wage