Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. 250 Words Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

Many People claims that high remuneration is more advantageous in comparison to
appropriate
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working environment despite lack of
satisfaction
with their
job
I firmly disagree with that statement of
essay
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the essay
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. I strongly believe that
working
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the working
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atmosphere and
job
routine should be relaxed and not hectic
also
align with the
person
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person's
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ability
instead
of pay that may lead some mental illness to a
person
.
First
of
all
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it is worth considering high pay
although
its
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it
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bring bread and butter for living
however
job
satisfaction
should be on top of priority that a
person
carrying a
job
should be overjoy with their work and do not compromise their comfort zone and
also
spend quality times with their family and kids. Many
researcher
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researchers
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claims that
job
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a job
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carrier should be parallel to a
person
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person's
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capacity that enables a
person
to carry
job
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a job
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in
longer
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a longer
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perspective
that is
not beneficial only for a
person
also
for the company.
Secondly
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there is a correlation
with
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job
satisfaction
and productivity of work. It
is motivate
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motivates
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you and
also
provide
a
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apply
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carrier growth. A
person
who loves their
job
can easily excel in their fields of work and achieve better results as compared to those whose
first
priority is high wage.
For
Instance
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Sir Amjad was working for a company with a high salary package but he had to compromise
a
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apply
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plenty of things to
carrying
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carry
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their
job
he decided to leave it and later on he became
successful
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a successful
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entrepreneur and run their own business progressively. To sum
up
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,up
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high salary package might bring sudden happiness
although
prosperous thing should be
job
satisfaction
that is
over and above than high wage
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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