The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Travelling by air is the quickest way to travel from one country to another. Over the

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decade

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the price of an airline ticket has significantly reduced, which allows travelling to different countries more accessible for a lot of

people

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I will discuss two

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and disadvantages of

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trend. The decrease in the

cost

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of flying has two major

advantages

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.

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, the service will be accessible for a wide range of

people

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, including middle and

low class

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people

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. Budget airlines,

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, are very cheap and it is affordable

by

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almost everyone.

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, the low

cost

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of flying will allow more businesses to expand as well as more students would fly abroad to achieve

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goals that they deserve without worrying about the

cost

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of an

airplane

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aeroplane

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ticket.

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, all these

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come hand in hand with their disadvantages. When overseas travel become easily accessible to everyone, the availability of

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services reduces.

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, when tickets are sold out,

people

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will have to wait for another day to fly.

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leads me to my

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point. To compensate for the reduction in availability, airlines buy more

aircrafts

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and more fuel to keep their businesses running.

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of these extra fuels adds

on

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to the carbon emission, which can lead to global warming. In conclusion, the significant decrease in the

cost

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of flying has allowed a wide range of

people

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to travel, but at the same time leads to

increase

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an increase

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in demand, and has an effect on the

enviornment

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environment

. In my opinion, there are more

advantages

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for

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the reduction in the prices of flights compared to the disadvantages.