The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Travelling by air is the quickest way to travel from one country to another. Over the

last

decade

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the price of an airline ticket has significantly reduced, which allows travelling to different countries more accessible for a lot of

people

. In

this

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I will discuss two

advantages

and disadvantages of

this

trend. The decrease in the

cost

of flying has two major

advantages

.

Firstly

, the service will be accessible for a wide range of

people

, including middle and

low class

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people

. Budget airlines,

for example

, are very cheap and it is affordable

by

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almost everyone.

Secondly

, the low

cost

of flying will allow more businesses to expand as well as more students would fly abroad to achieve

their

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goals that they deserve without worrying about the

cost

of an

airplane

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aeroplane

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ticket.

However

, all these

advantages

come hand in hand with their disadvantages. When overseas travel become easily accessible to everyone, the availability of

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services reduces.

For example

, when tickets are sold out,

people

will have to wait for another day to fly.

This

leads me to my

second

point. To compensate for the reduction in availability, airlines buy more

aircrafts

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and more fuel to keep their businesses running.

Burning

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of these extra fuels adds

on

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to the carbon emission, which can lead to global warming. In conclusion, the significant decrease in the

cost

of flying has allowed a wide range of

people

to travel, but at the same time leads to

increase

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in demand, and has an effect on the

enviornment

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environment

. In my opinion, there are more

advantages

for

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the reduction in the prices of flights compared to the disadvantages.