The governments should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on, even if they are unemployed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays a lot of

citizens

believe that

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the governments should give them a salary in order to develop their life independently if they are working or not. To that

extent

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I am totally in agreement due to the following reasons. As we all know, there are a lot of

citizens

who did not have the same opportunity to study or

furthermore

, to develop their career and in consequence, for them is quite difficult to find a decent job in order to receive a good salary. A monthly salary could help people to rent a flat or an apartment and

moreover

, the number of homeless people will decrease. Another point to consider is the movement of the economy. It means that the more

money

the

citizens

have, the fastest the economy will move. More specifically, if a huge percentage of

citizens

have the possibility to spend their

money

the economic situation will be improved.

Besides

, is remarkable the improvements that could have in the health area, it means that people with

money

to spend in pharmacy, will not collapse hospitals and GPs and in consequence, they will not consume public resources. It could be a good way to give

this

money

to governments back. To resume my opinion, I believe that a monthly income to

citizens

independently if they have a job or not could lead a lot of benefits to them and at the same time, to the society. Since politicians win the elections they have a compromise with their

citizens

because their salaries come from

citizens

and

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their responsibility to take care

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them.