Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is widely known that the
Internet
has a lot of things to entertain people
. Despite the fun things that the Internet
has, some people
often argue that it also
creates a mess. I strongly disagree with the statement because it is one of the tools to learn and connect with people
easily.
For students, the Internet
can be used to search journals to support each of students' essays. This
journal helps students to write good articles or writing assignments. Also
, for the architecture student, the Internet
helps to learn new architecture software. The internet
is capable to provide tutorials with an easy understanding.
Living in the midst of the pandemic era, it is mandatory to stay at home. While staying at home, people
can use of each the Internet
programs to talk, brainstorm, work, as well as access the education program anywhere and anytime. For example
, the last
February, I had a job interview with an Indian company even though I live in Indonesia. We had an interview scheduled with the help of the Internet
. That way, I can connect and expand the networking outside of the people
of Indonesia.
In conclusion, despite its dements, I disagree the Internet
causes problems because it is a technology tool to learn and connect with people
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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