Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion?

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becoming poorer.

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exploration sounds quite extravagant.

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, the same fund can be used to aid a country's economy rather than catering to one's expensive bucket list. In my opinion, money is a resource

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can benefit living beings. In

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perception. To commence with, a person coming from a middle-class background has various problems to handle and more important than going into

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exploration.

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, the affluent individuals can spare

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, not the employed or even the poor.

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average-salaried people.

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, taking care of basic expenses in metro cities has become a difficult task to tackle.

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, only people like Jeff Bezos can dream of going into

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and manifesting it into reality.

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, the wealthy generate a lot of residual money, which at times doesn't come under the government's radar.

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used in the right

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can build lives.

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of philanthropy by Bill Gates saved so many

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during the

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pandemic.

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, it aided the research work in building vaccines for the same. To give another clear example, Neeta Ambani, wife of Anil

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has developed a lot of schools that not only

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the wealthy but

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the poor. The purpose has assisted many children in getting an education free of cost.

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, catering to their better future.

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,

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exploration sounds quite extravagant and sophisticated

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a waste of money unless one is into it.

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, investing the same amount in something productive for society can boost not only the lives of people but

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the economy of a country.