The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that popular

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are usually focused on by the

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,

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should

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shift to the common

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. I disagree with

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statement because these famous individuals already lead public

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that earns them their fame and their actions affect ordinary

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and foremost, these celebrities deserve to be put in the spotlight because they are already used to a life of publicity and rely on it. Usually, it is because

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are known widely through the

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that they tend to earn money and build their fame.

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, shifting

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to ordinary

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would mean a loss of income on their part. Take,

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, many comedians nowadays are rich famous due to the fact that the

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gave them so much

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in itself shows the dependence that celebrities have on the publicity instituted by the

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, the

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is the only way through which ordinary

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can get to know what is happening in the

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of popular

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. To put

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in perspective, because many ordinary

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idolise these

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so much that they spend money just to have their presence, they deserve to know how the

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whom they spend money on are behaving.

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, many musicians of late engage in activities that they sing against just to gain popularity.

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, only when the

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focuses on their personal

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could

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be aware of their true nature. By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my stance that reporters should continue focusing their

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on famous

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because their actions affect the

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of ordinary

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and that they depend on that to maintain their status in society.

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, it has always been easy for them to enjoy being noticed by others.