Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting ti live in?

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Nowadays, people think we are living in the best
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era
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of our lives.
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, is
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the best or something more is on its way? In my opinion, I believe that we are living in the best
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, where everyone is rising and changes are being made to the world in a good way.
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, some believe that how would it be living
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the past where there was no use of
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and still assume that was the best for them
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, let's begin with
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technology
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which is a great run for the present and future generations as we all are using one
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the technological gadgets like mobile phones which is a basic need of today's population as nobody can imagine leaving the house without a mobile phone as most of the work is done through them as in communication, business meetings through zoom application, photography, navigation etc.
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, most of the advanced education is done digitally in many of the schools which
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very beneficial to the students as they do not have to pick a heavy load on their back and now they can easily store all the subjects, assignments, lectures etc, on their laptops. From seeing these examples, we
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tell that every day there is a new innovation whether it is in
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technology
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and thereby our lifestyle is changing day by day.
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, some argue that past time was more different and exciting.
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, where technical equipment was not in the play, people used to sit together and communicate and celebrate but if we consider
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we might say that communication is more extended and families are connected by the means of
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. In conclusion, it can be said that if changes
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constant in our country, nobody would have succeeded till now if we compare
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the other countries which are running
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the
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fast pace to increase the standard of living. Every generation takes birth with
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new
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and new thinking, so we should appreciate the changes happening
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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