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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts show the
principle
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 ways of finding out the
news
 in two different countries,
Canada
, and
Australia
. The two nations show broadly similar patterns, though there are some differences, both significant and minor. One of the most prominent features of
this
 data is that
while
 in
Canada
 over a
third
 of people access the
news
 online, in
Australia
 the figure is more than half, at 52%. It is apparent that viewing
the
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TV
news
 is popular in both countries, with about
two fifths
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 of
Canadian
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the Canadian
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 population
favoring
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this
 mode of delivery and only 3% fewer in
Australia
. One major difference between
Canada
 and
Australia
 is that over twice as many people read the
news
 in print in the former, compared with the latter. The figures are 14% and 7% respectively.
Similarly
, listening to the
news
 on the radio is preferred by three times more people in
Canada
 than in
Australia
.
Overall
, it can be said that the high levels of
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internet use in
Australia
 mean that other methods
such
 as radio and print are used less in comparison with
Canada
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words news, canada, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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