Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Even though there is a popular agreement that playing

computer

games

is a waste of

time

,

children

should not be allowed to play them, I have a different opinion. I totally believe that playing

computer

games

is getting more benefits rather than wasting of

time

. I feel

this

way for two

reason

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, which I will explore

this

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in the following essay.

To begin

with, In

this

modern life, technology plays a huge part

of

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people's lives. It helps people to have comfortable lives.

Children

are using the benefits from technology which make them grow smarter.

Moreover

,

this

allows the kids to use their strategic planning and thinking and enhance as well. Some of them choose the learn from

games

. My personal experience is a compelling example of

this

. About 10 years ago when I was a kid. I played a lot of

computer

games

such

as driving a car in a game.

This

affected

to

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me while I took a

driver

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license test in reality. I was able to use all of my skills from

games

,

as a

result

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I passed my

driver

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license test on my

first

tried

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.

However

, If I had not played

games

, I would not be able to

passed

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my driving test on my

first

tried

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.

Therefore

, playing

computer

games

has a positive impact on

people’

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interpersonal skills. Another obvious reason is

because

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that

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playing

games

will help

children

to improve their communication skills and

making

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make

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new

friends

from

games

that they will be able to strengthen bonds among other people.

For instance

, when I was a kid, I really like to play

games

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'DOTA' I was a leader ,so I needed to

communicated

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to

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my team.

Furthermore

, I have made a lot of

friends

from that

games

. We became

closed

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friends

in reality

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and

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we would be able to share our emotions and feelings.

On the other hand

, If I had not started playing

games

, I would not have

make

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new

friends

.

Hence

, playing

games

is not only beneficial communication

,

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but

also

expanding

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their social circle. In conclusion, for all reasons stated above, I encourage all

children

to

playing

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games

and limit

the

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their

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time

. If they do

this

then

they will discover for themselves that playing

games

is more beneficial rather than wasting

of

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time

.