Technology has made man more social or less social Discuss both views and give opinion

In today's ,world new innovations bring various changes in human life but some of them have positive effects or some have negative.
This
technology
made man more social or less social. In
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I will discuss both views and
also
provide my opinion in upcoming paragraphs. As man is a social animal. With the help of ,
technology
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they become
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more social
people
by using various applications on their mobile
phone
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like Facebook, Instagram and Whatsapp through which they can make
contact
with any
person
who is living in their own country or foreign nations. They can send messages, images, videos to them. They can
also
call them when they want or in case of any emergency.
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was printed in 2021, in the newspaper "The Tribune" which provides the information about nowadays
people
are more social than before with the invent of new technologies. They spend most of their time on social applications.
In other words
, some
people
are
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less social
person
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because
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innovations help them to do all the activities by clicking a button like they can pay their electricity, phone bills online and
also
perform or manage their banking activities by sitting at home.
This
reduces their travelling costs due to which they do not meet any
person
individually as the need to to go other place does not arise due to latest
technology
. It is very important for individuals to
contact
personally with each other because
this
will increase love between their relationships and they can
also
share their emotions and views more effectively which will bring them closer. According to my opinion,
people
are more social than in previous years because
technology
brings them together with the help of new developments in the system. Some years ago, if a
person
has to make
contact
with another
person
then
they have to go individually or send a letter to that
person
about the message which they want to convey to them.
This
was
also
time-consuming. But now
technology
has changed they can make
contact
with anyone or anywhere within a few seconds.
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