You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dell

company

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, I am writing

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letter to your

company

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about the problem which I faced while using

laptop

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of your

company

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. My name is Munish and I purchased a

laptop

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last

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year from the Dell

company

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which I thought is the best

company

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of laptops and computers and one of my friends recommend your

company

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laptop

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. But, I am not satisfied because the

laptop

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is giving too much problem to me as

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does not respond to any activity so fast and normally it shows not responding for every task. It

also

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takes too much time to start. As I am a student, I purchase it for my online classes but it does not help me much in that so, I am using my phone for any classes and assignments. My college work is affected due to

this

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problem as I always join

a late classes

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or am

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not able to submit my projects on time due to

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problems. I am too much tired from

this

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laptop

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as I am facing problems only due to

laptop

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problems. Now I want you to exchange my

laptop

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for other because I do not want to face any hurdles in my study. You can

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update

this

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laptop

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or see why

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laptop

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is giving trouble like

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. I purchased

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with

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guarantee. It is now your responsibility to fix it. I hope you will take my situation seriously and take any action as soon as possible. Thank you. Your's faithfully, Munish

Kamaljeetkaur6968Tue Mar 22 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

254 words

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The Greeting

The plans below show a public Park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Essay topics: In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?