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n some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Nowadays,
people
 are paying more attention to the
history
 of their
residence
.
This
eassy
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essay
easy
 will explore the reasons behind
this
 as well as how can
people
 find
these information
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. One of the
reason
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 that
people
 want to know more about their
residence
 might be due to religious
belief
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beliefs
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.
For example
,
people
 want to know if there were any
mishap
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mishaps
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happened
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that happened
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 in the past, or if the land was used as graveyards in the past decade. In most countries, housing is considered
as
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a big investment and nobody would want to spend their life savings on a haunted
house
.
Besides
, having a better understanding of the
history
 of the
house
such
 as the materials and structures used will assist the buyers in their valuation of the
house
 or building. The
beeter
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better
 the materials used, the more valuable the
house
 will be. As for how
people
 can find out about the
history
 of their
residence
, there are several possible ways to do so.
Firstly
, it will definitely be helpful to do
a
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research on the housing itself as well as the neighbourhood online. There are many real estate companies
which
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that
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 publish updates regularly on market research as well as studies on
neighborhoods
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neighbourhoods
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.
Secondly
, it might be helpful to contact the developers for more information.
Last
 but not least, neighbours or the previous owners are
people
 that might have knowledge of the
history
 of the
house
 or building as well. In conclusion, there are more and more
people
 researching
on
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the
history
 and background of the
residence
 they intend to live in for reasons
such
 as religious belief and valuation purpose.
Such
 research can be done through the internet, talking to the developers, the neighbours or the previous owners.
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