Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are
people
who give their whole lives to working only in one organisation.
However
, it is said by some part of a society, that a better choice is to
work
for varieties of companies. In
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I will look into both views and I will express my own opinion about
this
.
To begin
with, lots of
people
choose to stay at the same
place
of
work
for a
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time. The reason for
this
could be that they are likely to stay in
thier
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their
comfortable zones rather than to adjust to the changes all the time. But, when a person
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in the same environment for a long period of time, they are likely to be more efficient at
work
than a worker who
have
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just come to
this
company.
For instance
, my mom
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been working at the same hospital for over twenty years and she is doing her job very quickly and efficiently. In comparison, new
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, who has come to that
place
just a year ago,
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doen't
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doesn't
know much about the
place
and the stuff, so sometimes it can make her
work
slower.
Thus
,it is clear, that "old" workers are used to the
place
where they do their job,so they can be much
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quicker
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than "new" ones. But, is it really good for a human to stay steadily
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the
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one
place
? The
second
thought is that
people
should vary the organisations they
work
for.
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this
, we can learn many skills which can be very useful for us.
For example
, my aunt
have
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changed a lot of places she worked
at
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and she has gained skills like managing to accustom to
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environment, new
people
, she has become open-minded and aware of many
of
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ways of
handeling
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handling
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work
and in the
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she has opened her own company with
this
knowledge.
Therefore
, we can
behefit
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benefit
a lot from varying the organisations. In conclusion, there are
prons
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and cons
in
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both opinions.
However
, in my opinion, a better choice would be to
work
for many organisations. In
this
way, you can learn more and use
this
knowledge for your own goals.
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