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Band 4.5

you missed an appointment. Write a letter explaining what happened. In your letter include: what the appointment was a apology for missing the appointment  a request to reschedule.

I am writing
this
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 letter regarding the scheduled appointment
of
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for
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health
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a health
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 checkup at
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the Lake
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Lake side
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Lakeside
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 clinic. As
i
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I
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 was unable to present myself there. Allow me to brief my absence. We all know that your services are excellent and the staff is very gentle toward the patients which cause high walking and long queue for appointments. my appointment was planned yesterday at 11:30 am for
full
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a full
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 body checkup by
Dr.
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Dr
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 Yash, we use to take consultation and advice from him on
regular
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a regular
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period
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periods
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 of interval. I would like to show sincere apologies for not noting my presence as per request
,
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 because some of my
guest
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guests
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 arrived surprisingly at my stay .They came from far north and
was
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been
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 travelling
from
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for
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last
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the last
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 28 hrs. So attending them was
priority
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a priority
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 for me. Just to bring in your presence
i
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I
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 have early membership plans I am looking for
new
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a new
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 appointment at tomorrow on special request. Please let me know the confirmation on the same. I hope to hear from you soon positively !

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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