These days, we are seeing and increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,
children
spend more time than ever watching television. Use synonyms
However
, most of the programmes broadcasted daily contain high amounts of Linking Words
violence
. It is agreed that increased exposure to increased levels of aggressivity is affecting Use synonyms
children
's attitudes negatively. Analysing the adverse effects that Use synonyms
violence
has on human behaviour as well as Use synonyms
children
's tendency to reproduce what they see, will prove that.
Generally speaking, it is widely known that Use synonyms
violence
has negative effects on people. Use synonyms
For example
, when we watch a violent movie, our feelings are usually affected in a negative way, Linking Words
thus
we tend to feel nervous and uncomfortable. Thanks to numerous behavioural experiments, scientists came to the conclusion that a person who witnessed a violent scene, directly or virtually, is more likely to act aggressively than others who have not experienced the same situation. Linking Words
Hence
, it is scientifically proven that human behaviour is negatively affected by violent movies, images or situations.
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On the other hand
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children
are pretty easy to influence, compared to adults. They learn by observing and repeating what they see. Use synonyms
Consequently
, when a child spends most of his free time watching violent tv programmes, he soon begins to adopt aggressive behaviour. Linking Words
For instance
, every day we hear about more and more fights in schools or about episodes of Linking Words
children
punching their best friend or, even worse, a teacher. Use synonyms
This
is clearly a consequence of the increased amount of Linking Words
violence
on TV.
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violence
affects negatively, and psychologists have proven that. Use synonyms
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is even more true when it comes to Linking Words
children
because they are easier to influence than adults. Use synonyms
Therefore
, there is a link between the increased levels of Linking Words
children
's aggressivity and the growth in the amount of Use synonyms
violence
on TV.Use synonyms
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