A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In present days, an individual's importance considers by various factors. High society rank and material ownership have a vital role in deciding factor of a persons' position and old-fashioned morals like faith, goodwill and respect are no longer valuable. I believe that in
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than others with human values to a larger extent and it is examined
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with the social status, a citizen with a wealthy position is always considered as an important personality.
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, in public gatherings and events, celebrities have the most
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and they treat with high standards compared to others. Apart from that, people with a lot of money and property always find their way very easy in any sector for their needs.
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, authorities and government departments handle these kinds of citizens with the utmost priority and care,
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as many filmstars have done something illegal but they are roaming freely in the out because they have ample amount of valuables.
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, a human being with honesty is less countable by humankind. Just like there are few politicians
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exists who are polite and have never done anything wrong but these individuals consider with the least priority.
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, a person who is trustworthy is not considered as an essential living. Many factory workers and even home maids take care of the factories and house respectively, but their owners treat them as slaves and do not give them respect which they actually desire,
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of that, they value personality on the basis of income group. To cap it all, I majorly agree that, people judge by their possession values and their living status rather than human values. Indeed,
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is a bitter truth that characteristics of a good person like honesty, integrity and generosity are less considered than money and civilization should think about
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eventually it is the loss of a human being.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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