It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is argued that social media, pop culture and contemporaries are the reason behind

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upbringing whereas others say family

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as the leading role. Outdoor activities

provides

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a greater opportunity for a

child

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to

expereince

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experience

and develop knowledge about the

mordern

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modern

world but if the circle is not good

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could ruin the

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's life. In my opinion, family's role has a big impact

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child

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the child

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because they learn manners which are needed throughout their life.

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,

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child

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the child

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often loves

goingout

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going out

with friends in a pop

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involving in

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media

for

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which indirectly provides them

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kind of knowledge and experience of the real outside world. They understand how things function through

self exposure

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which gently helps them in growth and

development

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after school half of the young population are found visiting dancing clubs, making new friends and uploading in a media as a source of

development

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.

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, I believe

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child

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children

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are of exploring nature and if their friend circle is not good they may end up doing wrong illegal activities

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as drug addiction, bullying

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other

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, etc.

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, home is always

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school

of

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a

child

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to learn and grow.

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good

manners

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manner

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are taught in a home which

cultivate

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their mind beautifully. Parents

helps

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in guiding the

child

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which one is good and bad, motivating them in every

steps

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researched

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has found that children who are supported by their

family

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families

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have higher performances in their academic and career success. So,

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believe parents are the best well-wisher and

guider

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in the

child

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's

development

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various means like social networking sites,

pubshow

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pubs how

and schoolmates influence in the

child

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growth that could be risky if the company

thay

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they

that

have is bad.

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, family is always the safest as it keeps the children under proper discipline,

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helping in the better growth and

development

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