It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is argued that social media, pop culture and contemporaries are the reason behind
children
upbringing whereas others say family Change noun form
children's
act
as the leading role. Outdoor activities Add the particle
to act
provides
a greater opportunity for a Change the verb form
provide
child
to expereince
and develop knowledge about the Correct your spelling
experience
mordern
world but if the circle is not good Correct your spelling
modern
this
could ruin the child
's life. In my opinion, family's role has a big impact in
Change preposition
on
child
because they learn manners which are needed throughout their life.
Add an article
the child
a child
To begin
, child
often loves Add an article
the child
a child
goingout
with friends in a pop Correct your spelling
going out
also
involving in a
media Correct article usage
apply
for
which indirectly provides themChange preposition
apply
a
kind of knowledge and experience of the real outside world. They understand how things function through Add the preposition
with a
self exposure
which gently helps them in growth and Add a hyphen
self-exposure
development
. To cite an example, recently in the capital of nepal
after school half of the young population are found visiting dancing clubs, making new friends and uploading in a media as a source of Change the capitalization
Nepal
development
. However
, I believe child
are of exploring nature and if their friend circle is not good they may end up doing wrong illegal activities Fix the agreement mistake
children
such
as drug addiction, bullying Correct pronoun usage
others
other
, etc.
Fix the agreement mistake
others
Moreover
, home is always a
Change the article
the
first
school of
a Change preposition
for
child
to learn and grow. Every
good Correct quantifier usage
All
manners
are taught in a home which Change to a singular noun
manner
cultivate
their mind beautifully. Parents Change the verb form
cultivates
helps
in guiding the Change the verb form
help
child
which one is good and bad, motivating them in every steps
. To illustrate, Change to a singular noun
step
researched
has found that children who are supported by their Change the form of the verb
research
family
have higher performances in their academic and career success. So, Fix the agreement mistake
families
i
believe parents are the best well-wisher and Change the capitalization
I
guider
in the Correct your spelling
guides
child
's development
.
In conclusion, although
various means like social networking sites, pubshow
and schoolmates influence in the Correct your spelling
pub show
pubs how
child
growth that could be risky if the company thay
have is bad. Correct your spelling
they
that
However
, family is always the safest as it keeps the children under proper discipline, thus
helping in the better growth and development
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