Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Among subjects in school, History may consider
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the most crucial subject while it is commonly believed that Science and
Technology
are more important
regarding
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the modern
world
. In my opinion, Science and
Technology
are compulsory as it has a major contribution to our future. On the one hand, learning incidents from the past enables students to perceive what has been done correctly, what consequences of
such
actions and what practices should we do in the future to prevent
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repeated mistakes.
Therefore
, in the future, we would not commit any faults
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find
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alternative solutions to encourage
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peaceful
world
. A good example can be seen from
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World
War II, Pearl Harbour where Japanese people have suffered from the American bomb.
However
, it is caused by Japan’s greediness to be
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power
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nation.
Then
several years later, when there are any conflicts between Japan and other countries, Japan decide to draw a goodwill agreement because they experienced how
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the situation and suffer the populations would be if they have done the same.
On the other hand
, acquiring Science and
Technology
knowledge, nowadays, may give advantages both to the
world
and individuals.
This
means the one who has cutting-edge knowledge of these subjects would have higher abilities to invent many amazing things that benefit our
world
while the inventor receives
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amount of income.
Additionally
, Steve Jobs would be
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significant person who would be a good example. He was eager to obtain the education of
technology
and after years he has been studying, he become an owner of Apple who gain his business value of over 10 million baht and hugely changed people’s behaviour and our
world
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new ground. In conclusion, History may be the subject we should be concerned
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although
, due to the modern
technology
that has disrupted our
world
, it is a must for people to have understanding in preparation and continue bringing our
world
beyond.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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