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In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?

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Enhancing the rate of juvenile delinquency globally, many people have concerned about it. They believe that
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 of the justifications
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 would lessen
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 complications in future.
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 causes of
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 the most fundamental reason
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youngsters's
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 propelling toward crimes has to do with their careless families. To be honest, the majority of the kids upbringing
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 in early ages of childhood occur at home by their parents and nowadays, not only the fathers work outside of
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 the mothers are less visible due to their domestic or social involvements.
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, the children would undergo the impact of their outlaw peers.
Moreover
, all the standards of living are not suitable for youngs' breeding. To elaborate in detail, poverty could terminate into greed and that, in turn, is the main root of corruption. So eradicating the destitution would diminish crimes
as a result
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, it should be considered that
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 of the crime and the punishment would result in keeping on the felony. So the level of fine must suit the crime. After all, the governments ought to supply job opportunities for adolescents in order to have a lucrative source of revenue and could deal with their life expenditures. To draw a conclusion from what was mentioned above, it can be
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 that
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 range of factors originated from family, society and peers would turn a teen
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 a criminal and mutual understanding of them from early childhood
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 of severe punishment could decrease felonies of any type.
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