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Band 3.5

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph indicates the amount of
fish
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 and other kinds of
meat
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 consumed by people in a European nation from 1979 to 2004. Overall, it is clear that
fish
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 was the lowest consumption in
this
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 country. While there were declines in consuming
fish
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, lamb, and beef, people tended to prefer eating chicken to the rest types of
meat
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 in these years. Though the feeding on lamb and beef fluctuated, it dropped sharply from about 210
grams
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 to 110
grams
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 and from 150
grams
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 to 70
grams
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 respectively. There was no noticed change in serving
fish
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 for meals in
this
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 25-year period. The
fish
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’s portion for one person each week decreased slightly from nearly 60
grams
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 to 40
grams
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.
Chicken
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The chicken
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 was the
second
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-lowest consumption in 1979, at about 140
grams
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 per person each week.
However
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, there was significant growth in eating
this
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 kind of
meat
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 every 5 years. It even almost reached a peak at 250
grams
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 per person/week in 2004.
Beef
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The beef
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 was the most popular
meat
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 in 1979. Chicken so far was the highest
meat
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 consumption recorded in the period of 25 years.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Pattern
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Comparison
  • Relationship
  • Correlation
  • Significant
  • Implication
  • Prediction
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