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Some people think that the teenager’s years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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There are 4 stages in
life
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 : Childhood, teenage
life
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,
adulthood
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 and old age. Many think that
teenagers
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'
time
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 period is the joyous
time
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 of most people's
life
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.
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, there are voices giving the opinion that
adulthood
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 means more happiness despite the responsibilities. In my perspective, I strongly think that
teenage
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the teenage
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 years are the happiest moment.
Teenagers
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'
life
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 - stages of
life
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, learning new knowledge, new skills and techniques, making friends, enjoying school
time
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. It's an unforgettable moment to study in the classroom with a bunch of friends, being taught by strict teachers.
Teenagers
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' responsibility during their teenage
life
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 is to study, take exams and make their families proud of them. Sports and music classes enable
teenagers
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 to train their physical abilities and talents which indirectly mould their characteristics. People are saying, friends during teenage's
time
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 was the best and maintain the longest.
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, coming to
adulthood
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. Basically,
adulthood
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 means responsibilities. Responsibilities to individual, family and work. Adult entering society need to work hard to earn a living.
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, despite
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 burden on the shoulder,
adulthood
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 still brings joy to
life
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. Striving to make a better living and improve in personal characteristics, no doubt, adults can handle stress better. Having trips to the dream places like Tokyo or Turkey using hard earn money can only achieve during
adulthood
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 as adults are capable of earning their own money. In conclusion, I believe that teens'
life
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 is still the carefree happiest moment compared to
adulthood
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Satisfaction
  • Autonomy
  • Fulfillment
  • Pressures
  • Novelty
  • Responsibilities
  • Priorities
  • Transition
  • Rite of passage
  • Holistic
  • Nostalgia
  • Existential
  • Resilience
  • Maturity
  • Self-actualization
  • Rejuvenation
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