Nowadays, international
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getting more worldwide in the
and finding a human who is not aware of the recent events happening on the
of the
is getting harder. Some people have a positive attitude about
phenomenon and even argue it as a necessary subject to be taught in
schools while others suggest it does not worth the time of students.
being unaware of our
condition can be viewed as being
, I believe that students should not have
subject in their educational
. The essay will overlook both views which
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proceeding by my idea.
On one hand, the mankind alliance and the effects that they can cause on each other is crystally clear.
, consequences of a war in
other continentChange the wording
another continent
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can affect the
youngstersChange noun form
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lives not only in that continent but
around the
.
, teaching the young generation about the reasons
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those changes and providing them
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necessary means to get ready for the
can help them to deal with the probable similar situation in
.
, having a better understanding
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what is happening in the
opens their minds to help the vulnerable nationalities and save the integrity of humans.
, teenagers have always been viewed as the most sensitive group of society and the ones who are going to build the
of a country.
,
the daily worldwide
which mostly consists of bad
will affect a teenager's mental health much greater than an adult.
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will lose the most productive
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those negative effects.
, as said above, these
are the most important period in their lives to be taught the subjects that are needed for construction a developed and successful community and
find their talents and improve them in order to be
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useful society member.
, nothing should get these fundamental
from them.
To sum up, even though adding the international
to the
school subjects can help the young generation to be more prepared for the
, I believe it will put them at
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great risk of being suffered from mental diseases and wastes their most important
to make their
careers.