Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Certain
people
believe that the maximum joy's
of Change noun form
joy
life
are derived in the years
of being a teenager, while others are of the belief that adulthood brings greater joy as compared to being a teenager, despite the added obligations. Throughout this
essay, I will discuss both sides of the opinion and provide my views in favour of the former.
To begin
with, the teenage years
of a person
's life
are the carefree years
with very little
responsibilities and expectations. Correct quantifier usage
few
Furthermore
, an individual is allowed to make mistakes, without worrying much for
the consequences, as he has time to learn from his errors and rectify the same in the future. Change preposition
about
Moreover
, due to not having a wife and kids, there is no monetary obligation and threfore
Correct your spelling
therefore
,
can pursue his own interests with greater Remove the comma
apply
risk taking
abilities. Not only is the Add a hyphen
risk-taking
person
allowed to live life
on his own terms, but also
allowed to broaden his thinking. For instance
, a survey conducted in the USA has found out that most idea's for Add an article
a startup
the startup
startup
,formulate among Fix the agreement mistake
startups
people
in the age
group of fifeteen
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fifteen
years
to nineteen years
.
On the otherhand
, with the progression of Correct your spelling
other hand
age
, as a person
matures into an adult, there are certain limitations on his life
. The carefree attitude of the teenage years
is replaced by work and family duties. Consequently
, the individual is constricted in terms of independent life
choices that he can make, as he not only has people
who are depending on him financially and emotionally but also
has to start saving up for his old age
and retirement. Hence
, there is an attitude of living for the future than for the present. For example
, a survey conducted in the
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apply
,
found out that most adults were worried about Remove the comma
apply
cost
of healthcare in their old Add an article
the cost
age
.
To conclude, Teenage years
are filled with happiness as the person
is given the liberty to be whatever he wants to,without the obligations of taking care of a family or earning for
a living. Change preposition
apply
However
, the same cannot be proclaimed about adult life
, as the persons
responsibilities increases by multiple folds due to the Change to a genitive case
person's
persons'
people
associated with him and other unforeseen events that might come into his life
at a later date, such
as poor health. Hence
, I personally
of the opinion that Add a missing verb
am personally
teenage
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the teenage
years
are happiest
part of a Change the article
the happiest
person
's life
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