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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What problems does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?

#people #countryside #cities #towns
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increasingly
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 number of
young
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the young
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 generation are leaving the countryside to relocate in urban cities and towns leaving behind older generation group.
This
 will lead to several problems.
This
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occuring
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occurring
 due to
this
 and what steps can be taken to resolve
this
 issue.
To begin
 with, many youngsters often tend to shift
in
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 urban
areas
 once they complete their education. And the most prominent reason for
this
 is
lack
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the lack
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 of employment
opportunies
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opportunities
 in rural
areas
. As urban
areas
 are developed it has
lot
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 to offer like
well paying
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 job
oppourtunites
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opportunities
, comfortable lifestyle, better education and much more which fascinates the youngsters to leave remote
areas
 and settle in big cities.
However
,
this
 will have an adverse effect on rural
areas
. As there will be no young people to work which will affect the economy of the
areas
 and they will remain undeveloped. Despite
of
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the problems government can take
certains
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certain
 steps to tackle the situation. Creating job opportunities in remote
areas
 would be
most
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 effective solution. Not only the job
opportunites
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opportunities
,
government
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the government
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 should
also
 focus on improving infrastructure, construction of roads and hospitals , better education system
this
 will not only reduce the number of youth migration but will
also
 bring
development
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the development
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 of these rural
areas
. In conclusion, the immigration of youth is
serious
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a serious
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 concern. government should take action on
imroving
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improving
 the lifestyle of
countryside
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the countryside
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 for young people to live happily with
thier
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their
 families and not leaving
thier
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their
 hometown to pursue
thier
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their
 dreams.
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