Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access too much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Internet
becomes a crucial part of our daily life.
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, we use the
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Internet
to receive different kinds of
information
. Some
apperciates
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appreciates
appreciate
the
Internet
is so powerful, which can provide us with a large amount of
information
within a minute while some
argues
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that so many pieces of
infomration
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information
makes
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us in trouble. In the following, I will elaborate on both sides'
reason
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reasons
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and
then
offer my own. Some
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out that the
Internet
includes many
convienent
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convenient
searching engines,
such
as the well-known Google. Through these searching engines, people can find out many useful
informtation
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information
under their
need
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.
For instance
, if
one
wishes to purchase a notebook, she may want to know what are the prices of various notebooks made by different
manufactuers
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manufacturers
. In
this
case, she may find out the prices distribution of distinct brands easily and accurately via the searching program.
In other words
, people can receive
many
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valuable
information
through the
Internet
, fulfilling their own purposes.
However
, some contend that too
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information
provided by the
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Internet
indeed is not a piece of good news. Human beings are not computers; they cannot deal with too
many
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information
at a time. When there
are
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too
many
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information
at a time, they counter difficulties in making decisions. Let's think about the
exmaple
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example
of buying notebooks again. The
Internet
can
proivde
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provide
us with
information
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hundreds of notebooks, ranging from prices, types, brands, and so on. When there are merely two to three
choices
, it is not hard for us to make an
evelaution
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evaluation
. It is not the case of hundreds of
choices
.
This
situaton
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situation
makes us
more hard
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to make a final decision which to
pruchase
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purchase
. Yet, in
this
case, I think the key is
one
's purpose. If
one
think
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theorughly
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thoroughly
what she really wants, she will screen out many irrelevant
choices
.
For instance
, if she makes clear that she wants a notebook under $3000,
this
will help her cut down a lot of
choices
. In short, I think both
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arguments sound reasonable.
Internet
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can provide us with a lot of useful
information
while
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large amount of
infomation
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information
can confuse us when we are making
deceisions
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decisions
.
Nonetheless
, I
points
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out that if
one
can figure out her major purposes clearly, the large amount of
infomration
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information
will no longer be detrimental.
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