In many large cities, some people waste hours of their time every day because of traffic congestion on the roads. What do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest?

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is a challenging
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that happens in major cities. It impacts people’s productivity, quality of life, and the most dangerous one is air pollution
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brings negative effects on public health.
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factors that
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traffic
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as well as some possible solutions to solve
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. Several factors are at
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of
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traffic
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congestion. The main
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of
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is a large
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of citizens and
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. Many people live in big cities to improve their life
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as to get better jobs or education; so, the population grows rapidly over the year. Since the population increases,
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higher demand for
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rises as well. It leads to a significant increase in private
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that makes the
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over capacity
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. Limited public
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either in quantity or quality is
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responsible for
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. The limitation in mass
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causes people to use their own
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more often, which accounts for more congested/crowded roads. Another
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of
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is the quality of
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. Poorly maintained roads and
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light malfunction will result in accidents which delay the movement in the
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. After knowing the factors that
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the
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, there are a
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of ways the
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of
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congestion can be approached.
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public
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. Creating more various public
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like MRT, light rail trams, or buses should be a good solution. It may reduce the use of private
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. Another recommendation is
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improvement. Road widening, developing highways or bridges as alternative ways, maintaining
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lights and road
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routinely may lower accidents. For the
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up regulations,
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, 3 in 1 policy (minimum three people in one car) or odd-even plate
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zone enforcement to diminish the
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. There is no single
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of the
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jam
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problem
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, but
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large
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of the population and
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are responsible for heavier
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.
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, there are some solutions that can be taken, like developing more various public
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, improving the road
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, and constructing the law and regulation to minimize the
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of
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. If we can solve the
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jam
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problem
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, it will make our life much easier.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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