Many young people decide to work during holiday. What are pros or cons of doing a seasonal job.
Youngsters are the backbone of countries and many of them earn money during their holidays.
This
is a good activity for youth as it provides more benefits to them rather than demerits
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To begin
with, young people doing work on holidays will help them to earn more money through that they can reach their destination. Linking Words
For example
, nowadays many university students are studying with their own earned cash as their doing work part-time. If they trial on holiday Linking Words
also
, it will help them to buy the necessary things for their study. Linking Words
Moreover
, they can Linking Words
also
promote their families to those who come from low-background families.
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Secondly
, if people are going to a job during their adolescent age it will help them to gain more work experience and wishes to earn themselves in future. Linking Words
For instance
, some people are always ready to do any kind of job if they are educated Linking Words
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it is because of their previous experience as they did in their adolescent time. And they are ready to earn for their future without any hesitation.
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In contrast
, there are some disadvantageous Linking Words
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like if they earn a salary in their childhood which may make their self-interest to earn cash Linking Words
instead
of achieving good academic course. Linking Words
However
,some will be always on the same pathway without any improvement in their life.
To sum up, if society is working in their youth stage will help them to achieve a set of advantages rather than disadvantages. Linking Words
Instead
of playing unnecessary games and other things they can do some kind of small endeavour to earn money for themselves and for Linking Words
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their family.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...