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-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#-do #help #technology #students #information #support
Some argue that recent developments in
technology
 allowed
students
 to reach and emphasize new information faster than ever. I completely agree with
this
 statement and in
this
essay
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 I will describe the reasons behind my opinion. Improvements in technological devices and software are surely making
students
' lives much more convenient in many ways.
First
 of all, in the past, libraries were the sole source of knowledge for pupils where they have to spend hours and hours to find the correct knowledge out of thousands of books and encyclopedias. These troubles are not necessary for pupils anymore. With the innovation of computers, mobile phones and the internet, any kind of data are just minutes away. Another reason why
technology
 made
students
' life way easier in terms of information is that
students
 were not able to communicate easily with peers during academic research but with the improvements on social websites, they can contact and share their ideas and information
however
 they want so that they can create much more successful academic tasks.  
In addition
 to previous examples,
technology
 has one final benefit to
students
 which is that it provides online lessons, courses with certificate programs
Therefore
, they can achieve them whenever they want.
For instance
;
students
 want to complete some courses, but if they do not have enough time, they can get them online.
Also
, they can take these courses sooner.
Hence
, they can save time by doing so. In conclusion,
technology
 undoubtedly eases student's academic life and there are a bunch of solid reasons behind
this
 statement.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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