today many self driving vehicles are become more available. Some people thing this good thing, others disagree. give your opinionThe

The current
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trend
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in the world is to have fully automated vehicles,
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some people argue that there
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more
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than benefits.
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while
I believe that there are disadvantages, I agree that
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pros
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the cons
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regard.
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, fully automated vehicles
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independance
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independence
to disable and elderly population. It has become
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thing to look after elders and
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family members, mainly due to the restrictions on
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their
movements. A
self driving
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car can easily assist
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in
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gap, giving them some sort of
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independence
independent
.
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, these people can go to the doctor without waiting for someone to take them.
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, the number of accidents on the
road
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can be reduced. One of the major
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road
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accidents is human error, which can be easily overcome by a logically programmed automated vehicle. As a
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result
,
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safety will naturally increase
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, it reduces the
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pollution
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caused
by the use of fossil
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. Almost all
self driving
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vehicles are electronic cars,
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there is no use of fossil fuels needed for
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vehicle operation.
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leads to a method of reducing the
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dependency
dependence
on petrol and
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diesel
, resulting in less pollution. On the
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other hand
,
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trend will create more
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unemployment
as the need for people working as drivers,
traffice
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traffic
police and service station help-hands will no longer be required,
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there will be more
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unemployment
in the society. As we have seen, when one
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industry
close down another opens and
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provides different
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employment
opportunities. To conclude, I believe that the trend to move to automated cars
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more advantages, because it provides mobility to
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and elderly, reduce pollution and increase
road
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safety.

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