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As public safety is of the highest importance. it is often necessary to test new products on animals. It is befter for a few animals to suffer than for human life to be placed at risk by untested products. To what extent do you agree with above?

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Nowadays, the beauty industry is flourishing and it has become a billion-dollar industry.
Animals
 are often used for the experiment purposes of the newly launched
products
 for the sake of not harming human life. I strongly advocate
this
 approach and the benefits will be covered in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with, so many
products
 are launched in the market whether it's beauty or health wellness
products
 but before launching it into the market the testing needed to be done
first
. These tests are carried out on
animals
 to see the reaction or to ensure the safety of the product for human use. The use of
animals
 in research is essential for enabling scientists to discover new
products
. Alternate methods won't show the results the same way as
animals
 do and are not so reliable.
For instance
, in the beauty
industry
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 the cosmetics are tested on rats before putting it up for human use to avoid unwanted skin allergies or reactions because of the
products
. If the product is put out for selling without testing it might have some inevitable side effects and the company will have to pay a huge price for it.
Moreover
,it is good for few
animals
 to suffer rather than risk the lives of thousands of humans.
For instance
, in
this
 covid pandemic situation where researchers from all around the world were desperately seeking covid vaccine.
As a
result
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 so many tests were done on
animals
. In
this
 process so many
animals
 died
however
,
animals
 have a shorter lifecycle than humans so it is acceptable to experiment on them. In conclusion,
animals
 do not have the cognitive ability or moral judgement that humans do.
Therefore
, I believe putting a few lives of
animals
 in danger is better than risking human life.
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