Many wild animals are on the verge of extinction. What are some reasons for this? How can animals be protected?

Extinction

of species has always existed and not only is not exclusive to the twentieth century, but the superfluous rate of

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species

extinction

is a novel

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phenomenon that has been happening in

this

century. A great number of reasons and solutions has been suggested by experts. The following essay will overlook two of those rationales proceeding by a solution.

To begin

, the lives of living creatures are not immune to the changes

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the environment they are living in.

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, the best temperature that each species can survive is specific and a slight increase can result in

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of thousands of them, so the effect that

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global warming can have on them is

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blatant

.

Thus

, one of the obvious reasons

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this

event is the lack of the necessary attention that

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should have paid

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the environment.

Moreover

, illegal hunting is another concerning reason that has caused the death of numerous animals over the

last

decades.

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there was a considerable decrease in

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illegal hunting recently, it is still occurring in

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developing countries as a means of earning money.

Consequently

, a great deal of

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extinction

has ensued by the prevailing of

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business. Despite the above-said reasons being grave, the solution is feasible. The government, as the most responsible authority of a country, can play an important role in preventing

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of

this

situation.

Firstly

, by imposing rules against the industries which have the greatest impact on the Earth, it can not only help the animals but

also

save the Earth.

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, forcing factories to use renewable energies reduces

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pollution as an integral risk factor of increasing temperature.

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,

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illegal hunting should be restricted by strict supervision and

this

can be done by dedicating the essential budget.

Therefore

, if the government intervene in hunting,

this

problem will be solved gradually. To sum up, the extravagant increase in animal deaths and their subsequent

extinction

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environmental predicaments, like global warming and

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illegal hunting. I believe that the

governments

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interference is needed to control both issues.