You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Johan, It has been so long since I have received a letter from you. The reason for penning

this

Linking Words

letter is to inform you about the most recent fantastic event that happened in my country. As you heard from the news, the famous singer Justin Beiber arrived in Australia in the

last

Linking Words

week of April. And our local council arranged a series of special musical concerts across the state to commemorate his arrival to Australia. As he is a majority of community members famous singing star, lot of people were surprised by hearing his newly released songs on the live stage. Some of them got the signatures, some took selfies and others offered a lot of gifts to him.

Moreover

Linking Words

, as you know I am

also

Linking Words

one of the top fans of him and waiting for his arrival in my country. I presented him my huge photo collection which is full of his things and article collection which I collected since my childhood. So,

this

Linking Words

is the most memorable day in my life. I think you will enjoy hearing

this

Linking Words

novel news from me. Thank You. Yours Sincerely, Greg

madhuperera071Fri Mar 25 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
In our developed world, the majority of people have a tendency to devote considerable amount of time to working rather than to relax and unwind. However, from my point of view, there are several potential drawbacks which outweigh the benefits.
7
band
All education (primary, secondary and further education) should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people think that all education from primary to high school must be free to all people and managed by the government. In my opinion, I agree with this opinion because it helps everyone be educated, increases local efficiency, and increases social awareness.
7.5
band
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
There is a commonplace case in which some people from any state on all continents prefer to leave suburbs to relocate to urban areas hence the number of inhabitants of the village is diminishing. In my opinion, this phenomenon has advantages not only economic benefits but also human experience.
7
band
Recent sureys show increased interest in relocation and travel to other countries. What may be the reason for this trend and will be the possible outcome from this behavior provide example for your opinion
It is believed that people are keen on moving to a new place and going to various nations nowadays. From the writer's perspective, it is the desire to have a better life that results in this action and can lead to the economy going downward.
7.5
band
In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern society, soft skills in the job market appear to be held in so high regard that many people assume that academic knowledge may become unnecessary in the near future. From my perspective, I oppose this idea because of the importance of formal qualifications.

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

All education (primary, secondary and further education) should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Recent sureys show increased interest in relocation and travel to other countries. What may be the reason for this trend and will be the possible outcome from this behavior provide example for your opinion

In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?