In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. what is your opinion about this?
In
this
contemporary era, An increasing concern from many people around the world is protecting countrysides from any construction
. While one of the most topical issues is required to build new houses, I believe construction
in an environmentally friendly way will be beneficial.
On the one hand, with the growing population
, the demand for new residences is rising and urban societies are growing very rapidly, Moreover
More young people are moving to cities
for job educational opportunities and recreational facilities as well. These migrations from villages and towns to metropolises are likely to expand and move towards rural areas. If opportunities and basic infrastructures in villages and small towns are as many as those in metropolises, migration will be decreased and population
growth in long cities
will be probably slower. However
, the need for residential space has always been and will always be.
On the other hand
, it is generally accepted that contemporary cities
are growing in size and population
. Construction
in the city is likely to be impossible because.it causes growth of population
, much more traffic congestion and more air pollution. It is advisable to construct residential buildings with good designs, economical and sustainable friendly ways in the countryside,however
, the government should lay strict rules to protect the countryside from pollution and other hazards. For example
, sustainable building materials which can reduce the adverse of construction
on the environment Should be used.
In conclusion, increasing population
and migration to megacities and as a result
, requiring more places to live in have always been really significant in all communities, which is why the government has to expand cities
to the countryside but something must be done not to the environment.Submitted by payamrap on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite