some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. discuss both views and state your opinion?

some
people
believe that hosting an international
sports
event
bring
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lot
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of benefits for countries while other
person
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think that it has some disadvantage .
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point
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points
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of view.
first
of all, there are advantages of hosting an international
sports
event
.
firstly
a global
event
contributes to
increase
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tourist income.it is clear that big
event
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events
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attract
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a
lot
of
people
for
this
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events
,
therefore
businesses will have
increase
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or develop their profits. it
also
creates more
employments
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employment
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opportunities for
peoples
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people
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of that
country
.
for example
- organize any global sorts
event
governments should recruit a
lot
of
peoples
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people
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which creates more employment opportunities for the
people
. on
ther
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the
other hand, some
people
argue that global
sports
events
results
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in
loss
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a loss
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of money and time for the government and it
require
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a
lot
of money to get prepared for
thats
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that
that's
events
. to host
such
events
in any
country
have to invest a
lot
of money
for
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infrastructure and they have to
preparing
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the grounds for
gaming
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event
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. so that
country
people
think that investing in these international
sports
event
instead
they want their
governmentto
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government to
invest in some other
thingswhich
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things which
can help to reduce the poverty rate of that
country
. in
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both
view
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of international
gamng
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gaming
events
organize is more advantages.and
from
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my
opinion
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every
country
hosting
sports
events
is more helpful not for the
people
of the
country
but
also
for the
country
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic boost
  • infrastructure
  • national pride
  • cultural showcase
  • inspire a generation
  • temporary boost
  • environmental concerns
  • sustainable planning
  • public funds
  • divert resources
  • tourism influx
  • job opportunities
  • sports development
  • public health
  • construction
  • strategic investment
  • global audience
  • hospitality
  • public services
  • cost-benefit analysis
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