People aim to keep a balance between their work and other parts of their lives, but few people achieve it. What are the problems in trying to achieve this goal and how can these problems be overcome?

Nowadays people struggling in order to have a balance between their work life and family, but few of them are able to find

this

. In my opinion, there are a lot of factors involved in

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question and in

this

essay, I will relate them.

First

of all, I believe that

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each person has their own personal circumstances that could lead them to an awkward situation. I mean, it is quite difficult to try to find

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balance between work and personal life if, as a woman, you should take care of your children and at the same

time

, you should be hundred per cent productive at work. The lack of

time

is

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case the main problem that does not allow them to have a balance in their

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.

Secondly

, we should

also

consider that our current society has made us more competitive.

Moreover

, we have more responsibilities and it is traduced into a decreasing of our leisure

time

.

However

, we usually think that the more

time

we spend at the office, the more productive we are and in my opinion,

this

is where the mistake is. The general misconception which makes an association between success and job has transformed us into workaholics citizens. Even though we have money to spend, we do not have

time

to do it. To conclude

this

essay, I believe that, the best way to solve these problems is trying to be more aware that

time

is a precious thing that we have and if we improve its quality, we are

also

improving our life.

Nevertheless

, I

also

believe that governments are in part responsible for

this

and they should elaborate laws that permit people to have more leisure and free

time